Saturday, May 17, 2014

End of Commercials and Pyramid Horror Movie work

I wrote up one more beer commercial using Coors.  This one just came to me during a family get together last month.  It would be fun and pretty simple to do.  I may film this one for a demo reel.  All I need it time.

I had come up with an idea for a retirement savings commercial.  I based it off of an idea I had with a shark mascot, but I didn't know what to do with it then.  I'm planning on making some print ads to go along with this theme.  Look for them to show up sometime on my portfolio section in the near future.

And with that commercial written, so ends my work on commercial spec scripts.  I have twenty five now, so I think that's a good indication of what I'm capable of as a writer.  I'll work on getting a couple of them posted on my portfolio page too.  As soon as I get my clone to work on it.

With the commercial work completed, I set out to do a little re-writing on a past horror script about a pyramid.  I keep learning new techniques and screenwriting tips, so I wanted to incorporate them into this one.  This is an idea that my contact Mr. G was interested in, so I wanted to polish it up a little more before sending it to him.

I'm applying the "Anatomy of Story " information to it.  I'm not working on the whole book of ideas since this is already written, but there are a few things I can rewrite to make it better.  It's all about practicing your craft.

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